During the peer review, I got a lot of comments about the organization of my paper, the quotes I used, the sentence structure, and the transitions.
I went back and took some of my quotes and did what people had suggested: take them and break them up.
I also went back and tried to make my sentences more straightforward.
There was also a paragraph in which I had missed Joy's point entirely, and I went back and rewrote the ending of that paragraph to counter his argument more carefully.
Apart from that, I just changed the organization and some transitions.
I think the editing was very useful, especially yours though.
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