Wednesday's review wasn't as helpful as the other ones.
While he did point out some sentences that could be rearranged, and some wording that was wrong, the topic of my paper was such that he couldn't help me much.
After looking at all his comments, I was able to rethink the paper for myself and rearrange some parts.
The activity we did Thursday was a lot more helpful, since it affected my style which was somethign that has nothing to do with he topic chosen.
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